Open Heart
torn open
blood offering love
becoming
the mother
spaced between a daughters heart
she is what you are
Annie Welch
LOVELY: Life on the Inside
poetic form:
Shadorma 3/5/3/3/7/5
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4 comments:
Really strong piece Annie.
Annie, I agree...powerful and profound. I like that you shared the poetic form, too.
Lovely piece Annie, and I love the accompanying art...J
the chord is not cut for this "mother" with child they bore so many years ago. This silver lined chord resonates and vibrates in your words. profound written piece you have here.
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