Saturday, January 8, 2011

Solar Explosion - Lorenzo Bernardino



Of Body Aches and Sunburns

What started out as whispers,
spoke of gestures with soft warm stares,
two pairs of eyes met,
in a hurtful midday of desire.

Hidden in obscene corners,
where no vulgar words deterred,
mouthfuls of lustful gulps,
swallowed avidity in a bottomless hunger.

United rhythm of a selfish pair,
bodies turned, twisted, ached, and bared.
these solar explosions ignited,
freedom under the radiant king's glare.

In a scintillating afternoon's spur,
breaths sighed with reluctant succor.
bodies covered with sweet salivating sweat,
lay exposed to the humid air.

 
Lorenzo Bernardino, MD
Zorlone, A Dose of Creative Writing

9 comments:

Rusty on January 9, 2011 at 5:24 PM said...

They are having their own solar flare and its hot in here!!

Rusty on January 9, 2011 at 5:25 PM said...

They are having their own solar flare and its hot in here!!

Vikki North on January 9, 2011 at 6:35 PM said...

Oh yes. lol Solar explosion and afternoon delight. Well done Lorenzo.

Sarah on January 9, 2011 at 10:03 PM said...

Lorenzo, "solar explosions ignited" for a glorious and memorable tryst!

RiikaInfinityy on January 10, 2011 at 12:08 AM said...

Wow, wonderful! It is burning!

Zorlone on January 10, 2011 at 3:27 AM said...

@Rusty - I'm glad you felt the sizzle.

@Vikki - Yes indeed! Thank you!

@Sarah - "..." (can't think of anything else to add) Thanks!

Zorlone on January 10, 2011 at 3:28 AM said...

@RiikaInfinityy - Don't get burned. ehehe

Dan Baker on January 10, 2011 at 3:31 PM said...

Whoooo, it's hot in here! Wonderful! I love your interpretation :)

Zorlone on January 12, 2011 at 4:49 AM said...

@Dan - Thanks mate! I appreciate it.
Cheers!

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