Of Body Aches and Sunburns
What started out as whispers,
spoke of gestures with soft warm stares,
two pairs of eyes met,
in a hurtful midday of desire.
Hidden in obscene corners,
where no vulgar words deterred,
mouthfuls of lustful gulps,
swallowed avidity in a bottomless hunger.
United rhythm of a selfish pair,
bodies turned, twisted, ached, and bared.
these solar explosions ignited,
freedom under the radiant king's glare.
In a scintillating afternoon's spur,
breaths sighed with reluctant succor.
bodies covered with sweet salivating sweat,
lay exposed to the humid air.
Lorenzo Bernardino, MD
Zorlone, A Dose of Creative Writing


9 comments:
They are having their own solar flare and its hot in here!!
They are having their own solar flare and its hot in here!!
Oh yes. lol Solar explosion and afternoon delight. Well done Lorenzo.
Lorenzo, "solar explosions ignited" for a glorious and memorable tryst!
Wow, wonderful! It is burning!
@Rusty - I'm glad you felt the sizzle.
@Vikki - Yes indeed! Thank you!
@Sarah - "..." (can't think of anything else to add) Thanks!
@RiikaInfinityy - Don't get burned. ehehe
Whoooo, it's hot in here! Wonderful! I love your interpretation :)
@Dan - Thanks mate! I appreciate it.
Cheers!
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